Here's a short I wrote over the weekend. let me know how you feel about it, if you have any ideas as how to make it not boring. Still not sure about the title. Thanks for checking it out.
Will
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http://www.geocities.com/underarrest_2000/garbageshortdraft1.doc
Ideas so far from Claire & Dad:
-Make it a silent movie
-Thought bubbles during boss/joe office convo...
My idea: Make it operatic. Not a musical, just a lot of big gestures and talking loudly. I don't know.
If I cut Mike's occupation out, the script would lose a page at least, so that's a quick answer if it runs too long. The only reason it is in there is *drumroll* I don't want it to be boring!
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